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Lost But Not Forgotten by ~HelpImALostCause:iconHelpImALostCause:



Lost But Not Forgotten

Intro:
A drip down the face, again
Direct result of your urgency
Only the best will give up chase
After all the sweat and blood’s
Been poured out for you all

lap it up!
Quick!
…please…
Just do it for us
Just do it for us all

Pre-Chorus:
Lost from the artery, forgotten from the sky
Have we really lost out, have we faded to grey?

Chorus:
All this baggage, you’ve thrown onto my shoulders
Involuntarily, I have to accept
Yet you’re splintering my bones, that bear the weight

Choking away my once true love
Silencing the cry of deep passion
You don’t know it but you’re ruining, it all

Verse:
Smother me,
Load me up,
And set me on my way

Trouble me,
With expectations,
Soaring high, and higher

Interfere
With what’s
Not yours
Allying with desires,
But distant,
To the gaze.

Eyes now sore from the staring
Sore from speculating:
“Am I alone with this box of dreams?

Eyes now sore from the staring
Will there be no-one left when…
Will there be no-one left at the end, at all?”

Pre-Chorus:
Lost from the artery, forgotten from the sky
Have we really lost out, have we faded to grey?

Lost from the artery, forgotten from the sky
Have we really lost out, have we faded?

Chorus:
All this baggage, you’ve thrown onto my shoulders
Involuntarily, I have to accept
Yet you’re splintering my bones, that bear the weight

Suffocating the plea of aspiration
Murdering the soul strapped to my spine

Post-Chorus:
Lost without love
Since nobody will notice, care for us
Palms up!-hands red and withered
Through tearing through you insides again
Only not to solve anything, not to cure anyone


You’re going to die,
I’m sorry,
I’m so sorry for you…the dream’s deceased
Long ago with its brothers and sisters
Denied existence

But I want it so bad! Can’t you see?
I need it, my lungs can’t cope without
I’ve been deprived, for far too long
Striving, never fully, truly achieving

When will I reach the peak?
When will I breathe…break through…if I ever do…hold me (hope) close

Bridge:
Lifelines thin, grips begins to slip
Heart monitors fade into the background music
Replaced by the booming voices, the hate
Is there any point in this?
Why do we…
Why should we…
Carry on…

When will it end?
Will my heart stop before the pedestal?
I don’t want to be remembered, as the body sprayed across this floor
Where’s the glory in that?
I don’t want to be the boy who dreamed but never fulfilled

But boy, who am I kidding?
Kidding myself, just to believe again

Chorus:
All this baggage, you’ve thrown onto my shoulders
Involuntarily, I have to accept
Yet you’re splintering my bones, that bear the weight

Choking away my once true love
Silencing the cry of deep passion
You don’t know it but you’re ruining, it all

It all

It all

Outro:
Is there any use of all this sweat and blood
That’s been poured out for you?

lap it up!
Quick!
…please…

lap it up!
Quick!


…please…
Just do it for us

Sometimes I plead for death, just to get this over with
Just to offer me some release, from this constant climbing

Never reached the height I was dreaming of
Never resurfaced after the fall,
From five hundred floors into the darkened waves

…Will we ever…
©2008-2009 ~HelpImALostCause
:iconhelpimalostcause:

Author's Comments

I wrote this after my mum pissed me off about how by being in the band we should be famous soon (implying why aren't you?) and suggesting that I should learn backing vocals to improve our sound. Soz band based, but doesn't have to be implied in that way-lol-

DEFINITION:
-"A drip down the face, again"
:a tear drips down my face again

-"Allying with desires, but distant, to the gaze"
:saying things to help me, but not actualy helping at all

-Lost without love, since nobody will notice, care for us"
: not suceeding since no one notice's or likes us

-"Through tearing through you insides again"
: through trying so hard again

MY INTERPRETATION:
"Altho written about the band, I suppose it CAN be applied to several other situations. Basically it deals with how you try so hard in something, yet no-one realises that you actualy (or you think) you have talent. It also deals with how people put pressure on you to do well, but in fact it doesn't help but hinder. It also deals with doubting you'll ever suceeding, but at the same time, wanting to suceed sooo bad and be remembered as something. And basically talks about how you've never aspired to the place you wanted to"

-lol-

There you go:
PLEASE add any alternative interpretation to this piece
Your opinion on it
Any comments on the title
And any improvements you way have.

ALL would be greatly apreciated. Thanx

H!IALC:headbang:

Comments


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:iconhelpimalostcause:
It's loooooong! I know!-lol-

Tend to write more when I have a certain idea-loads of ideas spiralling in my head.

Ever been offered help which actually hinders?

H!IALC:headbang:

--
Life-Is for living
Death-Is for dreaming
And Sleep-Is for snoozing and soaking up the sun


-Check out my band's site: [link]
:iconedwardking:
i like the idea of believing in yourself. its like the american divide thing i may have mentioned before:Americans say "we can" and the English say: "can i?"

--
"In a democracy there is no right not to be offended"
-Shami Chakrabarti
:iconhelpimalostcause:
Yeh, sometimes you've got to carry on and ignore everything else for no good reason if you want to suceed.

It annoys me when people pressure others to suceed-if they're planning on suceeding they'll do it in their own time

H!IALC:headbang:

--
Life-Is for living
Death-Is for dreaming
And Sleep-Is for snoozing and soaking up the sun


-Check out my band's site: [link]
:iconmickygreeneyes:
somehow it seems that the title could have been used before
the text is weird, i like it
all in all: coooool

--
"That is not dead, which can etarnal lie, yet with strange aeons, even death may die"
my Scottish motto: "by sea and by land"
:iconhelpimalostcause:
Not sure if the title's been used before.

Actually it was a proposed band name for my band RELINQUISH by me, it's also what my myspace's profile is called(never use it soz) it's jus a phrase I liked and had used before and wanted to include it-I thought it fitted this piece.

Thanx Micky (thanx 4 da attention-lots of love)

H!IALC:headbang:

--
Life-Is for living
Death-Is for dreaming
And Sleep-Is for snoozing and soaking up the sun


-Check out my band's site: [link]
:iconmickygreeneyes:
i just think it sounds like it could be from nghtwish or within temptation

no problem

--
"That is not dead, which can etarnal lie, yet with strange aeons, even death may die"
my Scottish motto: "by sea and by land"
:iconhelpimalostcause:
Yeh, they're ok bands-lol-

Can't get ur link 2 work-at skl

Soz...

H!IALC:headbang

--
Life-Is for living
Death-Is for dreaming
And Sleep-Is for snoozing and soaking up the sun


-Check out my band's site: [link]
:iconmickygreeneyes:
oh ok

--
"That is not dead, which can etarnal lie, yet with strange aeons, even death may die"
my Scottish motto: "by sea and by land"
:iconhelpimalostcause:
Soz

H!IALC:headbang:

--
Life-Is for living
Death-Is for dreaming
And Sleep-Is for snoozing and soaking up the sun


-Check out my band's site: [link]

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