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Esss . Ohhh . Esss

Verse:
It’s amazing
How the dumb can lead the blind
Following each other into the tunnels
Much like how public can pass you by
And shopper’s bodies circulate forward
As violence sparks alive in bright day

They’ll get away…
As we turn away…

Pre:
Are we protecting ourselves?
Have we lost faith in guardian angels?
Cut off vision, shut off sound and watch as everything fades

Verse:
It’s amazing
How stares can’t gaze
Or jerk one sincere blue
For others haunted by death
The fallen all around them

And I huddle
The darkness can comfort me-now
And I weep
Content in the monotony of rocking
Hands clenched around my legs
Head buried deep into sweet flesh
And I loop…till I’m tired

No-one is coming
No socket is damp to its touch

Pre:
Are we protecting ourselves?
Have we lost faith in guardian angels?
Cut off vision, shut off sound and watch as everything fades

Chorus:
Gone is evil as the devil sinks
But do we really want it this way?
Triumph-till truth stares us face to face
But do we really want it this way?
We know no other
We don’t know any other way to combat the dark
Darkness of man’s heart

Bridge:
Our souls have been dirtied by those corrupt
Ignorance has grown into our bliss
Since nothing will move us

Nothing will shake, shock us now
Make us tremble…

Corpses rattle in their shallow graves
As traditional goodness dissolves away
And we wash our hands of his blood

Our souls have been dirtied by those corrupt
Ignorance has grown into our bliss
Since nothing will move us
Nothing will shake, shock us now
Make us tremble…
Corpses rattle in their shallow graves
As traditional goodness dissolves away
And we wash our hands of his blood

Outro:
God save our souls!
For we need it the most!

God save our souls!
For we need it the most!

We have been corroding for too long
Now spiralling to the soft ground
An accident waiting to happen
©2008-2009 ~HelpImALostCause
:iconhelpimalostcause:

Author's Comments

Yeh I got inspiration to write this one after having a pretty loud argument with my brother(unfortuantely I share a room with him) and randomly my dad pops up and asks "U ok?" completely oblivious of what just happened, the piece is kinda themed around that. Oh and the title's (S.O.S=save our souls) got bored of writing it normally, so I wrote it weird-lol-


DEFINITION:
-"Or jerk one sincere blue"
: or let out one sincere tear
-"No socket is damp to its touch"
: no eye sokcet is about to cry


MY INTERPRETATION:
"I wrote this about the idea of how people can easily turn a blind eye to nasty situations happening around them I experienced this 1st hand when I was assaulted in daylight in a town centre (shouting for help) and no-one did anything. The 1st verse is kinda directly themed around that. The pre-chorus explains this, it asks are people ignoring this to protect themselves, and how they can just look away, ignore the noise and everything will go away. The 2nd verse talks about how people can ignore the terrible things happening to people in the world (famine, war, etc.) and how they can both ignore it and not feel sad about it. It then moves onto how people can be miserably and depressed and no-one can notice. The chorus then goes onto dealing with how people can think evil doesn't exist and they are triumphant as long as they don't know the whole truth. The bridge talks about how this attitude has effected us: how nothing can shock us anymore, how no-one's caring and won't take the blame and how our ancesters would be ashamed. The piece ends with it talking about the conclusion of these attitudes how we need help and that we've accepted these attitudes for too long, which willl only end up with disaster"

-lol-

There you go:
PLEASE add any alternative interpretation to this piece
Your opinion on it
What you think of the title
And any improvements you way have.

ALL would be greatly apreciated. Thanx

H!IALC:headbang:

Comments


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:iconhelpimalostcause:
Funny enough the weird title took a while to perfect.

There are sooo many combinations-I hope I got it right

-lol-

H!IALC:headbang:

--
Life-Is for living
Death-Is for dreaming
And Sleep-Is for snoozing and soaking up the sun


-Check out my band's site: [link]
:iconh-a-n-k:
oh wow ^^
love it

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Yes, I'm Not Ok... And You Got Shot??
:iconhelpimalostcause:
Yeah so do I, n like it says the idea surrounding it is based on truth but just expanbded to other situations-lol-

Glad u love it, coz I love it but there hasn't been too much attention given to it

Thanx a lot (esp. da fave)

H!IALC:headbang:

--
Life-Is for living
Death-Is for dreaming
And Sleep-Is for snoozing and soaking up the sun


-Check out my band's site: [link]
:iconh-a-n-k:
i think the same things about some of my pieces ^^
but don't worry
eventually people will see its beauty.

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Yes, I'm Not Ok... And You Got Shot??
:iconhelpimalostcause:
Yeh like u-lol-

Watch out! Will be putting some new pieces online soon

-lol-

H!IALC:headbang:

--
Life-Is for living
Death-Is for dreaming
And Sleep-Is for snoozing and soaking up the sun


-Check out my band's site: [link]
:iconh-a-n-k:
^w^ can't wait

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Yes, I'm Not Ok... And You Got Shot??
:iconhelpimalostcause:
Nor can I-for ur repsonces-lol-

H!IALC:headbang:

--
Life-Is for living
Death-Is for dreaming
And Sleep-Is for snoozing and soaking up the sun


-Check out my band's site: [link]
:iconh-a-n-k:
^^

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Yes, I'm Not Ok... And You Got Shot??
:icondisturbedchicken:
this is an old piece so i feel bad i didnt ask this sooner lol
but what was the argument about?
:cling:

--
as far as i'm concerned, you could say "the potatoes have boiled over" and it would sound romantic to me.." :heart: lol

i love you so much! :heart: :heart: :heart: :smooch:

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